Love Burning Bright

I never post my poems. So consider yourselves lucky.

My love for you is burning bright.
When we first met.
We could never fight.
When I first met you.
You were all nice.
Before that, my heart was all ice.
You took my heart and made it solid gold.
I know when I stayed with you.
I was no fool.

   

   

Comments

great poem !! i write them all the time,.

Great peom I write a lot too usually never post them either but my myspace does have a few I did as blog if you go to my earlier blogs !

i do have alot, but most of them are really just me venting in poem form, like one time, i was upset because i could not have a cd player in school and the teacher told me because all the other kids either have their headphones blasting till they cant hear anything, or so loud that it disturbs other kids, and i wrote about that, only like 20% of my poems are actually heart felt.

The only stupid question is the one that remains unasked
~Niebr~

thanks,

The only stupid question is the one that remains unasked
~Niebr~

it's wonderful! clear. forthright. and unconditional.

 

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