Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

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Hot2na
Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

i read the words you write, they're strong.
would they be better suited, in a song?

yes, she is not gone, and for you she does not long.

your heart needs time to mend,
do not spend it on the end.
spend your time here with friends, for there are many ears to lend.

Tuna ><(((( '> the other white meat! I am Keeper Of The Whip!

supervioletrays
Re: Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

I don't write songs. Haha. And there is no mend for which there is no end. You can say the words but they don't sing like the chords strung. My pain is flowing down, going on the floor and around. There is no stopping what I've begun. May I live to see the light and the new rising sun.

---The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had---

Hot2na
Re: Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

think of something snappy,

turn your sad words happy.

life is to short,

to think of a retort.

smile big and don't feel crappy!

 

Tuna ><(((( '> the other white meat! I am Keeper Of The Whip!

supervioletrays
Re: Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

Oh life is short

And I feel nothing

Wasting away here in life

I kiss goodbye

And thank friends close

For all they have to give

Now I'm not going away

For I have no where to go

Hells fires I do not want

So here I will stay

Suffer and cry

As my life carries on.

---The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had---

Hot2na
Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

don't let a broken heart do this to you

get on with life, there's bigger fish to chew.

turn your words to fame,

reclaim your name,

for in the end you'll see it was lame.

Tuna ><(((( '> the other white meat! I am Keeper Of The Whip!

supervioletrays
Re: Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

I have no desire to make a name

I'd rather slide away unseen

Don't look upon the face of the broken

For there you will see evil, shrunken

Just cast your eyes on another deserving

Not of hells amusement.

---The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had---

Hot2na
Re: Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

you feel you've known her half your life,

now she doesn't want to be your wife.

why do you treat her now so cruel,

open your eyes, she's your friend, a jewel.

 

Tuna ><(((( '> the other white meat! I am Keeper Of The Whip!

supervioletrays
Re: Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

Do you know of what you speak? I have known her half my life. A wedding I did not seek. I haven't said a word, yet no friend does she fool, I have no crown, no need for a jewel. Ensure that your on topic, not far down in the tropics, before an assumption becomes true.

---The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had---

Hot2na
Re: Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

no words of mine will go unspoken,
i wish i had your myspace token.
for if i did, guess what kid?
i'd fix your heart and it wouldn't be broken!

*c'mon now....that was creative!?*

Tuna ><(((( '> the other white meat! I am Keeper Of The Whip!

supervioletrays
Re: Writers Corner- Posting Your Work

Not bad. =]

---The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had---

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