Okay... before I post this, in my own defense this was many many MANY years ago... and I was hopped up on cold medicine and in a goofy mood... I just dug this up today and since someone's been bugging me to post... I figure at least with this one I can blame on drugs (LEGAL AND NOT ABUSED lol)
Love Sick
That feeling’s creeping up my spine The chill runs through my veins Skin so hot it burns to touch In it’s path, sweat remains Deny the truth, I can no more Although that’s what I’d love To drown myself within the lie To refuse all of the above But all dreams must come to an end And reality’s left in its wake To face off with my fated luck But my body cannot forsake I wish to leave the warm confines This blanket around me brings I miss my freedom and energy Spent on more constructive things This feeling within me is known too well And I believe it a waste of time Its purpose still is unassigned A virus in its prime A cure has yet to be found for this A definition not yet concrete So now the only option left Is to give in and admit defeat I refuse to let this take over my life I have better things to do So I let myself suffer through it Until it infects someone new I hope it lingers within me not I hope it makes it quick I’m sick of being tired And I’m tired of being sick.
Disclaimer: I'm not one for poetry... the drugs made me do it!
Ok so saturday hubby'o'mine and I have our 3 year anniversary (not wedding anniversary, that's in October) and Well I wanted to write a poem for him, i always write him cards so I wanted to do something a lil different, BUT, i SUCK at poetry, this is what I have so far, don't laugh!
As I sit here I think of you
No matter what I do I think of you
You’re always on my mind
Privacy, do you mind?
As there is no privacy between you and I
I still feel the butterflies as I stare into your eyes.
Okay... before I post this, in my own defense this was many many MANY years ago... and I was hopped up on cold medicine and in a goofy mood... I just dug this up today and since someone's been bugging me to post... I figure at least with this one I can blame on drugs (LEGAL AND NOT ABUSED lol)
Love Sick
That feeling’s creeping up my spine
The chill runs through my veins
Skin so hot it burns to touch
In it’s path, sweat remains
Deny the truth, I can no more
Although that’s what I’d love
To drown myself within the lie
To refuse all of the above
But all dreams must come to an end
And reality’s left in its wake
To face off with my fated luck
But my body cannot forsake
I wish to leave the warm confines
This blanket around me brings
I miss my freedom and energy
Spent on more constructive things
This feeling within me is known too well
And I believe it a waste of time
Its purpose still is unassigned
A virus in its prime
A cure has yet to be found for this
A definition not yet concrete
So now the only option left
Is to give in and admit defeat
I refuse to let this take over my life
I have better things to do
So I let myself suffer through it
Until it infects someone new
I hope it lingers within me not
I hope it makes it quick
I’m sick of being tired
And I’m tired of being sick.
Disclaimer: I'm not one for poetry... the drugs made me do it!
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Trinity, this is beautiful.... I simply love it. Thank you so much for finally giving in and posting!
---The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had---
Ok so saturday hubby'o'mine and I have our 3 year anniversary (not wedding anniversary, that's in October) and Well I wanted to write a poem for him, i always write him cards so I wanted to do something a lil different, BUT, i SUCK at poetry, this is what I have so far, don't laugh!
As I sit here I think of you
No matter what I do I think of you
You’re always on my mind
Privacy, do you mind?
As there is no privacy between you and I
I still feel the butterflies as I stare into your eyes.
-Pain is weakness leaving the body- USMC OOrah!
Ok, here is my final Draft, it may not be a 10 but i tried my best, what do you think? Any suggestions?
-Pain is weakness leaving the body- USMC OOrah!
[quote=bella22] what do you think? Any suggestions?[/quote]
i can think of 2 quick-good reasons i like it:
so don't change it or ask for "
suggestions," because then i wouldn't be you or "yours."Tuna ><(((( '> the other white meat!
Thanks, I always hated writing poetry in English class because I'm obviously not good at it, but I wanted to do something different this year.
-Pain is weakness leaving the body- USMC OOrah!
Never change what comes from your heart?
---The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had---
K wrote this awhile back...here goes...
I feel the music of you and I want to write
songs about you.
I see love, life & comedy all in your eyes-
and I want to always swim & laugh
inside them.
The magic dance of a new tomorrow,
puts a smile on my hope.
The memory of a lingering touch, feeds my
soul and awakens an old feeling.
For you, I would sing & dance,
be true and wonderful.
For this feeling I would write a thousand
songs & swim in every drowning pool of
tears.
Deeply, gladly losing myself in the mess
of your hair-
just to be close to you.
And I know as I feel the strength of your
heart against mine; as I feel every aching
drum of hope, lust, and fear-
that the music I hear will always guide me
to you.
"I'm just trying to find a decent melody...song that I can sing in my own company."
there you are, right on que.
hate, distrust, and angry words too!
i waited a minute, an hour, or more.
but you never showed and i grew bored.
i thought you'd be here yesterday,
my how time flys when you're miles away.
Tuna ><(((( '> the other white meat!
Alone
Empty
Sorrow
Plenty
No one here
An empty beer
Friendship
Lies
Deception
Flight
Longing cries
Deaf sight
Questions
Frustrations
Light
Flight
Nothing left
Why care
Ugly
Stupid
Weak
Died
No wonder
Smart minds
Forget
Turn
Hate
Run
I’m nothing
Despair earned
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